Shot of the sky. Camera moves downwards to show a shot of Montiago university.
An 18 year old girl is walking through the main entrance, sporting a lavender hoodie. Her hand carrying a bulky looking camera.
Random guy 1: hey look, isn't that girl from the photography faculty?
Random guy 2: yeah, what a pity...a pretty face like her should totally by a model...
Random guy 1: I wonder why hasn't anyone hook up with her?
Random guy 3: Haven't you guys heard about the curse?!
The two guys turn to RG 3.
Random guy 3: The rumour is this: if any guy spends more than an hour with her alone, he will have bad luck....
"Haaaarrrr?!" the two guys
Random guy 3: It's true! I was in the same high school there was this one guy...
*SLAM* A pair of hands slammed on the coffee table.
The three guys looked shocked.
It was a girl who interrupted their chatter.
Girl: Don't you three stooges have anything better to do in the morning besides talking nonsense?!
The three guys looked scared, gave a "y-y-yeah...of course we do..."
RG1: errr...haha..what was it boys? err ... clinic duty?
RG2: Oh YEAH! There was this lady with SErious tonsilitis... and
"WE BETTER GET GOING!" all three of them replied simultaneously. Then, they ran off.
Girl: geez, it is no wonder why we can't find any boyfriend material in Med school...
"MARISSA!"
Marissa turns around.
Marissa: Rachel my darling! *opens arms to embrace her*
Marissa embraced her violently.
Rachel: Ahhhh~ okokok that's enough!
Marissa: Haha.. *lets go* SOrry.... oh... I see you took photographs of the sunrise again... seeing 'him' later eh?
Rachel: Yup! Right after class. Wanna come along?
Marissa: Sorry... working till late today. Send him my regards!
Rachel: Ahahaha... sure...kisses too? hehehe
Marissa blushed.
Both girls laughed out loud in the main uni walkway. Passersby looked curiously.
Marissa: ok, I gotta go now. Juniors waiting...
Rachel: Alright, catch you around...
Both girls depart on their separate directions.
I'm going to read this! yay!
ReplyDeleteOk my feedback is that I liked the whole part at the beginning with the three random guys, I feel kind of iffy about the scene with Marissa and Rachel. I like the dialogue, it's just that well I'm confused in that part of the story XD
ReplyDeleteOh wait a minute I get it XD
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