Monday, October 1, 2012

Chapter 1

7 years later...

Shot of the sky. Camera moves downwards to show a shot of Montiago university.

An 18 year old girl is walking through the main entrance, sporting a lavender hoodie. Her hand carrying a bulky looking camera.

Random guy 1: hey look, isn't that girl from the photography faculty?

Random guy 2: yeah, what a pity...a pretty face like her should totally by a model...

Random guy 1: I wonder why hasn't anyone hook up with her?

Random guy 3: Haven't you guys heard about the curse?!

The two guys turn to RG 3.

Random guy 3: The rumour is this: if any guy spends more than an hour with her alone, he will have bad luck....

"Haaaarrrr?!" the two guys

Random guy 3: It's true! I was in the same high school there was this one guy...

*SLAM* A pair of hands slammed on the coffee table.
The three guys looked shocked.

It was a girl who interrupted their chatter.

Girl: Don't you three stooges have anything better to do in the morning besides talking nonsense?!

The three guys looked scared, gave a "y-y-yeah...of course we do..."

RG1: errr...haha..what was it boys? err ... clinic duty?

RG2: Oh YEAH! There was this lady with SErious tonsilitis... and

"WE BETTER GET GOING!" all three of them replied simultaneously. Then, they ran off.

Girl: geez, it is no wonder why we can't find any boyfriend material in Med school...

"MARISSA!"

Marissa turns around.

Marissa: Rachel my darling! *opens arms to embrace her*

Marissa embraced her violently.

Rachel: Ahhhh~ okokok that's enough!

Marissa: Haha.. *lets go* SOrry.... oh... I see you took photographs of the sunrise again... seeing 'him' later eh?

Rachel: Yup! Right after class. Wanna come along?

Marissa: Sorry... working till late today. Send him my regards!

Rachel: Ahahaha... sure...kisses too? hehehe

Marissa blushed.
Both girls laughed out loud in the main uni walkway. Passersby looked curiously.

Marissa: ok, I gotta go now. Juniors waiting...
Rachel: Alright, catch you around...

Both girls depart on their separate directions.




3 comments:

  1. Ok my feedback is that I liked the whole part at the beginning with the three random guys, I feel kind of iffy about the scene with Marissa and Rachel. I like the dialogue, it's just that well I'm confused in that part of the story XD

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